Analysis of Daddy Bird Released

Douglas Blair 1951 (London)



He sees me from a mid branch

His colouring keeps him safe

And I can hear his bright song

All over the place.

His young have left their nesting.

I saw them in lower bush

And finally Mommy Dearest

Gave them a push.

So now the liberty singing

He cares not, predators come.

Branches will hide, swift to the skies.

They are Home.

Catbird mimics others.

A final joke, you know.

But he will never see

His youngsters grown.


Scheme X X X X A B X B A X X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011 11111 0111111 11001 1111110 1110101 01001010 1101 11010010 1111001 10111101 111 11010 010111 111101 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 430
Words 102
Sentences 9
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 20
Words per stanza (avg) 5

About this poem

So many lessons with the birds. I used to hear catbirds often while having lunch outside my factory employment. Paid a trip once to a dear friend in the Carolinas. There I heard the Mockingbird. Wow.

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Written on January 18, 2023

Submitted by dougb.72572 on January 18, 2023

Modified by dougb.72572 on January 18, 2023

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Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

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