Analysis of Walking It Off



He had needed this
A walk late night

No one observing, or hearing

He wanted it that way.

Wanted to bellow out

Mental illness in the household.

Worries without number.

He had argued often

From logic's platform.

The delusions stuck like glue.

Had seemed so real to her.

Became the knee-jerk reaction

Wife in the throes of

Schizophrenia (so diagnosed and treated).

Now God was most

Cerainly in Presence

And hearing out

The deeper matters.

Answers would not come tonight.

(But Father was there

Je ne sais quoi How.


Scheme XA X X B X C D X X C D X X X X B X A X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 0111 11010110 110111 101101 1010001 100110 111010 111 0010111 111110 01011010 10011 0100101010 1111 1010 0101 01010 1011101 11011 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 787
Words 171
Sentences 23
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 20
Words per stanza (avg) 4
Font size:
 

Written on December 19, 2022

Submitted by dougb.72572 on January 19, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

51 sec read
6

Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

All Douglas Blair poems | Douglas Blair Books

4 fans

Discuss this Douglas Blair poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Walking It Off" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 24 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/148965/walking-it-off>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    7
    days
    2
    hours
    58
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    AA Milne wrote: "A bear, however hard he tries..."
    A "has very very tired eyes"
    B "grows tubby with no exercise"
    C "stinks and attracts the flies"
    D "can never stop telling lies"