Analysis of I shouldn't forget everything



I find each thought as it lands in mine
And grasp it tangled and intertwined
And the voices call between my minds
Sometimes you are right, sometimes blind
I ask the universe where?, and what if?
And think each day what they need to forgive
Wishes are made for the emptyness as
I imagine in my life that I am blessed
Barely awake God speaks from my dream
That this reality sometimes leaves a scream
And although you are not my only creation
You leave my heart with pure elation
And the glow you hold grows significantly
For I am in you and you are in me
So when it is silent and you are alone
Whilst the world seems to go on without you
you still fulfill the whole
For your love passes by from my true heart
And you are still part of this work of art
Whether or not you can speak hear or see
Or your arms are long enough to reach out for me
Or your soul feels confused at the thought of me
I am here for you for eternity
And the weight of this world
Would cry endlessly
If you thought that you were not here for me


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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,013
Words 206
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 805
Words per stanza (avg) 205
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Written on February 01, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on February 01, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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