Analysis of Prayers Made Differently

Douglas Blair 1951 (London)



Prayers different now
Less of petition upon petition
Thanks upon thanks
Wonder after wonder
Pleas for others’ needs.
Praise adding to praise.
These were all good.
But perhaps too much
Jaw flapping and
Me, me, me.
Obstructing the us, us, us.
Might I quiet down?
Start with I love you Dad
Would meditation be so bad?
Thoughts and waiting
Rather than narrating
And we see reverently
What you bring to the table.
Comforts.
Directions.
Corrections.
Connections.
Whispers from out of Left Field.
Communion’s yield.
A being together
In all sorts of weather.
Yeah, You would like that
I believe.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMMNNJOPQQQRRDDST
Poetic Form
Metre 11001 1101001010 1011 101010 11101 11011 1011 10111 1100 111 0100111 11101 111111 1010111 1010 1011 0111000 1111010 10 010 010 010 1011111 11 010010 011110 11111 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 591
Words 114
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 466
Words per stanza (avg) 99
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Written on February 02, 2023

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Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

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