Analysis of Canoe Rocking, neath the Stars.

Douglas Blair 1951 (London)



It is thirty minutes
After Camp’s Supper.
Down to waterfront.
Launching canoe alone.
All day noisy kids.
But not now.
Boating luxurious minutes
Before Campfire.
Slight waving on Bay Waters.
Round the point
To inlet of reveries.
Distant loon out some ways.
Mentions “you’re back
You’re back.”
And dives.
Peeper frogs give sweet
Soundtrack.
One mammoth male
Bullfrog booming out sexual lust.
Nothing else seemingly
But myself stretched prone
Feet on gunwales
Head resting back on
Propped paddle.
Rocking, thrilling
At westerly Red.
And other privileges of
The Bay, owned by me
For now.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 595
Words 109
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 467
Words per stanza (avg) 94
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Written on February 03, 2023

Submitted by dougb.72572 on February 03, 2023

Modified by dougb.72572 on February 03, 2023

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Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

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