Analysis of An Other



They put me in another room
The unstoppable rays of the sun caught me
They spoke over my soft voice
The roar of the ocean waves taught me
They saw me differently than who I was
My presence causing a stir
My essence fading to a blur - their loss
Their sneers veiled with smiles
Their gaze rendering me invisible
I walked miles, until I ran
I ran through fields of tall grass until I stood tall and proud
I swam across oceans until I soared
I merged with a galaxy of stars in an eternal cosmic dance.
You need my light, my gentle permission
You need my love, my loud admission
You need my color, my unshakable fervour
You need this "other", you need me, my brother
You need this "leader", you need me, my sister


Scheme ABCBDEFGHIJKLMMEEE
Poetic Form
Metre 11100101 00100110111 1110111 011010111 1111001111 1101001 1101010111 11111 1110010100 1110111 11111110111101 1101100111 11101001101010101 1111110010 111111010 11110101001 11110111110 11110111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 715
Words 144
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 559
Words per stanza (avg) 137

About this poem

This poem is about racial equality, written by a brown woman of color who has migrated from India to North America. I write this on Martin Luther King Day as I connect with his spirit.

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Submitted by emailvasundra on January 16, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Vasundra Srinivasan

I am an immigrant woman of color. A daughter. Apart from this, I am a successful technology professional with 12 years of experience. I work at a large Big Tech corporation as a software architect. I am passionate about arts that engage communities and facilitate representation of marginalized voices and racialized communities. In the past, I've worked with the Art Gallery of Mississauga as a podcast host for 'border crossings' a podcast series about BPIOC artists from various walks of life. more…

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