Analysis of As the Ocean
Luna Jane Bearer 1995 (Pennsylvania)
You my love are as the ocean,
turbulent and gray.
Always coming closer,
yet further you go away.
At the edge of a precipice
to peer in your soul.
Dove deep into the water
towards an unknown goal.
Sailing ‘round your heaven,
I wandered upon the sky.
Glowing stars had appeared
as I hailed the sun goodbye.
Certain beauty in the darkness,
glory in the night.
I cry out, but not in pleasure,
at our awful plight.
Can you hear the sirens calling,
floating on the gales.
I plug my ears, search within,
and face their frightening wails.
You bring me to the highest peaks,
cast me back on down.
Floating through a black abyss,
a queen who lost her crown.
As the tide is with the moon,
to you I have been drawn.
I bound myself to this ship,
to sink until I’m gone.
Scheme | ABCB DECE AFXF DGCG XHXH XIXI XJXJ |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain |
Metre | 11111010 10001 11010 1101101 10110100 11011 1101010 011011 101110 1100101 101101 111011 10100010 10001 11111010 110101 11101010 10101 1111101 0111001 11110101 11111 1010101 011101 1011101 111111 111111 110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 768 |
Words | 175 |
Sentences | 14 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 83 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 21 |
About this poem
This poem is about someone I loved very deeply, who would give and take his love for me. I chose to devote myself to this love, losing part of me in the process. Choosing love over happiness, because love does not always mean we are happy.
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Written on June 05, 2020
Submitted by amandajanebearer on January 04, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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