Analysis of Ending The Meds
Off the Meds
I take meds when I’m sad, ingest them if I’m mad.
They settle down the nerves, sealed tight and iron clad.
They bristle back buffoons, and jokers by the score,
And tote away the angst, and anger evermore.
I need them every day to help me problem solve.
Won’t go from them astray, it helps my world revolve.
Their kept for many reasons, in choices they’re involved.
If lead to some malfeasance, with them I’ll be absolved.
If I’m failing or I’m freaking, in fear then for my hide.
Not flinching, I’ll consume them, so I can then abide.
And if I am leaking fluid, or green around the gills,
I’ll move and speak with grace, by gulping down those pills.
But what if I were to stop, and just let real life in,
Would it transform me anew, to a life of splendid sin?
What if I have an urge, for a life now and raw and rich,
Would it not condone the scratching of that itch?
Yes, why not break the chains, of what’s keeping me so sane,
To release any impulse, deemed to be my bane?
If one must go through hell, to see fullness of the light,
Why douse passion’s flames and have me lose the fight?
Was the mystical concealed, monsters veiled and masked,
Or the dervish earthly bound; demons not put to task?
Was imagination mired, to mellow and murky dreams?
Instead, I’ll give the infirm, word to burst from the seams.
Bend and break the bars, from prisons of the sane.
Let that phoenix rain, fresh ashes of the pain.
I’ve danced so well while delving, in a life confined,
I’ll add a spell of hell for life more well defined.
Al Bartolis 1/7/2022
Scheme | A BBCC DDEE FFAA GGHH IIJJ XXAA IIKK A |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 101 111111011111 110101110101 11011010101 01010101010 1111001111101 111101111101 1111010010101 111110111101 11101110011111 1101011111101 01111010110101 110111110111 1111011011110 11011011011101 11111110110101 11101010111 1111011010111 101101011111 1111111110101 11101011101 101000110101 1010101101111 1001011100101 0111001111101 10101110101 11101110101 111111000101 110111111101 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,699 |
Words | 336 |
Sentences | 21 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 30 |
Letters per line (avg) | 40 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 132 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 33 |
About this poem
Sure meds enable us an even keel glide through life, but what a ride we could take if we(me and my med friends) went commando!
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Written on January 07, 2023
Submitted by ABP57 on January 21, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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