Analysis of I dislike the blinkers and the way that you are



I dislike the blinkers and the way that you are

You don't see me
I fall into your blindspot
I'm drowning in the ocean
When you can't see past the sand.
Your hooves beat a staccato
They feel the coolness
Through your own handcrafted tunnel vision
I dislike the blinkers,
And the way that you are.


Scheme A XBCBBDCDA
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10101001111 1111 110111 1100010 1111101 111001 11010 111101010 10101 001111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 297
Words 59
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 9
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

This poem is about how my mother never really saw what it was that I needed throughout my childhood and this has caused a fractured adult relationship.

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Written on January 17, 2023

Submitted by Bridgenslaurie18 on January 17, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Laurie Bridgens

I am a 24yo female and have been writing since childhood. I actually participated and was published twice the anthology of poems in my primary school years. My dad writes poetry and it has always been something special for us. more…

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