Analysis of Saltless Sea

Ryan McFarland 1987 (Massachusetts)



What it is, I wish to see.
What it is, I long to be.

But here I am, floating in this saltless sea.

What it was, I've already seen.
What it was, I used to be.

But here I am sinking in this saltless sea.

Into its depths, under its waves
Unfathomable breadths, the darkness craves.

But here I am, gone forever in this saltless sea.


Scheme AA A XA A BB A
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1111111 1111100111 11110101 1111111 1111100111 01111011 0100010101 111110100111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 348
Words 81
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 41
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

This poem was inspired by the machinations of narcissists and gaslighting of people in relationships.

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Submitted by rpm087 on January 24, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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