Analysis of The Shadow



                          The Shadow
Enduring in the shadow,
Dwelling there by choice.
A refuge of security,
Tranquility enjoyed.

Tucked-in tight from every angle,
In a fortress deep and wide.
No smothering isolation,
Free to spread one’s wings and fly.

Life came to be a mishap rut,
Desperation as its guide.
Worldly ways—fleeting and shallow,
Self-improvement—born of pride.

Medication—robbed motivation,
Twelve Steps—much to discern.
Condemnation—pluck your own log,
Will Power—Grit the burn.

Of intent none call for darkness,
Nor request the law’s long reach
A mess of fueled frustration,
Resolutely hunting for relief.

Beckoned to the shadow,
Rescue’s rope is clutched when thrown,
Broken repentance gains contentment,
To think clearly and steady grow.

Faith proves to be of merit,
Staying sane though trials abound.
Under the shadow of The Almighty,
Pleased daily to be found!


Scheme AAXBX XCDX ECAC DFXF XXDX AXXA EGBG
Poetic Form
Metre 01 010001 10111 01010100 010001 101110010 0010101 1100010 1111101 1111011 010111 10110010 1010111 0101010 111101 0101111 110101 10111110 1010111 01110010 10010101 10101 111111 100101010 11100101 1111110 10111001 100110010 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 911
Words 164
Sentences 12
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

Psalm 91:1 speaks of the only true source of rescue, “the shadow of the Almighty”. I am on the other side of a long struggle with being out of control in many areas of my life, Over the years , many forms of rescue were offered/tried without a, “from the inside out”, heart change This speaks of my journey to finding the heart of rescue and living the promise of Psalm 91:1 (easy to remember-911 the call number for help/rescue). Psalm 91:1 “He wo dwells in the secret place of the Most High shall abide under the shadow of the Almighty.  

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Written on January 28, 2023

Submitted by phumes on January 28, 2023

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Pamela J zHumes

I’ve never published, but alway am rhyming (e.g. a special song dedicated for each child/grandchild). Creating cheers was my very favorite thing about being a cheerleader. Also, a love for reader understanding and buy-in was developed through years of writing psychological reports for children as a school psychologist. I desperately wanted the reader to see the whole of the child in each report. more…

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