Analysis of Al from Belleville, or thereabouts

Doug Blair 1951 (London)



Head up, adventuresome

From Belleville and

Prince Edward County.

Bird sanctuaries, cottage folk.

Old wartime airstrip.

Wave at Ivanhoe, the cheese place.

Gaze from marina docks

Trees everywhere, hoping.

Near First Nations lands.

Highway seven crossing

And if unlucky a right turn

Toward nation’s capital

After Perth and Carlton Place.

Ottawa was usually

A nasty bone in his throat

Mulroney, Chretien,  Martin

(and the shipping company).

But Levesque was far worse.

Dissecting a Nation, maybe.

As if ready to detonate something

Of value and

Turn from hominids

To other mammals.

Al’s favourites since

And made mythical in

Many frozen moments.

Beavers of Renfrew.

Mythical Fox jogging

Highway 500 at midnight.

Comical furry sled huskies

In Pang on the Baffin.

Riding the rails out to BC.

MURDERING a pestering

Maybe, not sure.

(He vanished into rail-side brush.

At high speed.)

Working timber, apples.

Fraser River marvels.

Short RCAF commission.

Marrying a solid partner.

Cuba, post revolution’s

Mexico and hot mayhem.

And panhandling, full culture.

Leningrad with all those

Churches in mothballs.

Can’t keep Al* quiet.

Typewriter always clacking.


Scheme X A B C X D X E X E F X D B X G B X B E A D H X X X X E X D F C E X X X H H G I X X I X X X C
Poetic Form
Metre 110100 1010 11010 1100101 111 1110011 110101 11010 11101 11010 01010011 0110100 1010101 1011000 0101011 0100110 0010100 101111 01001010 111011010 1100 111 11010 111 011000 101010 10110 100110 111 1001011 01101 1001111 1000100 1011 11001111 111 101010 101010 11010 10001010 101010 10011 010110 10111 1001 11110 1011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,382
Words 296
Sentences 37
Stanzas 47
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 47
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 20
Words per stanza (avg) 4

About this poem

Al Purdy is a Canadian poet of stellar proportions. Refreshing and manly. Wanderer.

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Written on February 16, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 16, 2023

Modified by dougb.21370 on February 16, 2023

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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