Analysis of Fracture

Dramatic 2008 (Minnesota)



A Fracture in time,
A pierce in the matrix,
A promise of shattered dreams

A spirit of dirt,
A soul in a skirt,
Sew shut, words hostile and mean

Does living, winning,
Spiritless, and grinning
Hell and fatality brought to our Earth

Calamity, depravity,
Catastrophic and cavity,
Raining disaster to only make it worse

As laid in the dusk, and
As crammed in a grave while a
Violent hole maliciously welcomes you

Gray sky turns to black,
But you're ailed by the fact,
You'll be appointed, disjointed into

Monster, Creature
Drowned in a bleach blur
Eaten alive, devoured by a lie

A gentle touch to be missed,
Soaked in distortion and piss,
Unwilling to be detected by Horus' eye

Get one last glimpse,
Of the life you won't miss,
Now it's time to be gone and jam-packed in a casket

A casket, a racket, a ruckus, two tears in a bucket,
A duckling, no hope for any luck-it doesn't matter,

You're blood mixed like batter, Does it make you sadder?
Get fatter from consuming the colossal deceit.

Eat and meet and greet, abstentious, intentional lie.


Scheme XXX AAX BBX CCX XXD XXD EEF XGF XGH HE EX F
Poetic Form
Metre 01001 010010 0101101 01011 01001 1111001 11010 1010 10010011101 01000100 0100100 10010110111 110010 1100110 10010100101 11111 111101 1101001001 1010 10011 1001010101 0101111 1001001 010110101101 1111 101111 1111110110010 010010010110010 01011110111010 111110111110 1101010001001 10101101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,048
Words 213
Sentences 3
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Written on February 28, 2023

Submitted by Dramatix_Poetry on February 28, 2023

Modified on March 24, 2023

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