Analysis of Your Presence
SamiBukhsh 1991 (Karachi)
Your Presence makes me happy,
Your absence takes my joy,
As a child becomes grumpy,
When he has lost his toy,
When you are in my sight,
My ayes are bright,
When you take permission,
I feel great hesitation,
When you wave your hand,
I feel to lose my land,
When you go out of sight,
My smile takes a flight.
| Scheme | AB AB CC DD EE CC |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1101110 110111 1010110 111111 111011 1111 111010 111010 11111 111111 111111 11101 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 313 |
| Words | 77 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 6 |
| Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
| Lines Amount | 12 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
| Words per line (avg) | 5 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 39 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 10 |
About this poem
The poet talks about the presence of his love. He mentions how he feels when she says goodbye.
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