Analysis of Spilled a mess



Broken jar of mayonnaise
Glass broken white muck
Top shelf of frigerator
Too crammed.
Couple of rich words.
Cupboard for broom and mop.
Don’t leave any glass bits…

Two days ago
Lost my cool with neighbour
Over the back fence.
Card carrying Liberal supporter.
Loves Trudeau, the P. M.
Justin is just plain
New Age jerk, socialist, untrained.
Anybody smiling at him
Has rocks for brains.*
You too Neighbour.
(Looks got darkened.
More arguments with passion.
The F Word interspersed.
Turning, storming away.)

That Mess at the back fence.
Clean it up.
Wayne me boy.

* just a personal opinion. Not having all the facts.
Not worthy of libel action. Smiling now.


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Poetic Form
Metre 101110 11011 1111 11 10111 101101 111011 1101 11111 10011 1100100010 101011 10111 11110001 10001011 1111 111 1110 1100110 01101 101001 111011 111 111 10100010110101 11011010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 665
Words 134
Sentences 21
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 14, 3, 2
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Written on March 07, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 07, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on March 07, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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