Analysis of Famous last words



This sweet cesspool called life
Leaves many soulless
Broken inside
With the mantra
"Better to burn out than fade away".

People plot and plod
Until age makes one succumb
Often still in denial, even surprised by
The inevitable, preordained pact
To which we are all contracted.

Born to die
Yet we are told to
Bear the agony
So let’s have no sadness - no furrowed brow
There’s nothing new in dying now.

The good news is
We are about to make our greatest adventure yet
Into joy, unutterable bliss, or oblivion
He's down for the count
Not getting up.

Oh wow. Oh wow. Oh wow!


Scheme XXXXX XXAXX AXXBB XXXXX B
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11010 1001 1010 101111101 10101 0111101 101001010011 001000011 11111100 111 11111 10100 1111101101 11010101 0111 11011110100101 0111110100 11101 1101 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 578
Words 115
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

This poem is drawn from the last words of the rich and famous who have passed on, emphasizing the futility of life.

Font size:
 

Written on February 14, 2023

Submitted by sandra.mobbs on February 13, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

34 sec read
53

Sandra Mobbs

Sandra Mobbs – Freelance Journalist, Children’s Hospital Support Worker, and Foster Carer. Other interests include poetry (reading and writing), motorcycle riding, photography, and hanging out with my family, friends, and other weirdos. more…

All Sandra Mobbs poems | Sandra Mobbs Books

1 fan

Discuss this Sandra Mobbs poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Famous last words" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 29 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/153164/famous-last-words>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    2
    days
    10
    hours
    41
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Because I could not stop for _______ - He kindly stopped for me
    A Time
    B Death
    C Hope
    D Love