Analysis of Getting Back Up On That Horse



Growing up with horses.
He’s perfected where he stands.
He always keeps a cool head.
And he rides with good quiet hands.

Transmitting such conviction
Always puts the horse at ease.
The horse feels safe and confident.
It’s aim become to please.

This worked in life at large
The horseman came to understand.
He met with much success,
And there was always help at hand.

And then one day, when illness came,
He still steadfast rode through.
Without complaint, nor fear, or doubt.
No other way would do.

Time and again he beat all odds,
And all were quite amazed.
Good riders, see, can ill afford
To let themselves be phased.

And when the odds were stacked
Against him pulling through at all,
The horseman didn’t lose his cool.
His trust would break his fall.

“Just do the surgery doc”, he said.
“I’m sure as I can be.
You do what you are good at.
Leave surviving up to me.
No need to take complete control
And try to steer my course.
Just leg me up again will you?
Back on that bloody horse.”

The surgeon didn’t hedge his bets.
His hopes were riding high
To see the savvy horseman
Win the stakes and gallop by.

And so - as was his style -
The horseman, having this on side,
Excelled with flying colours
In his death-defying ride.

No greater proof prevailed.
It now was plain to see of course.
A cool, clear head is king
For getting back up on that horse.

Gab Greig Copyright ©️ 2023


Scheme ABCB DEXE XFXF XGXG XHXH XIXI CJXJXKGK XLDL XMAM XKXK X
Poetic Form
Metre 101110 1010111 111011 01111101 0101010 110111 01110100 110111 110111 0101101 111101 0111111 01111101 11111 01011111 110111 10011111 010101 11011101 110111 010101 01110111 0101111 111111 110100111 111111 1111111 1010111 11110101 011111 11110111 111101 0101111 110101 1101010 1010101 011111 01010111 011101 0110101 110101 11111111 011111 11011111 1110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,410
Words 303
Sentences 30
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 8, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

I wrote this, inspired by my partner of 17 years when he was 59. Due to complications after a double lung transplant, he miraculously survived an additional life-threatening surgery. These days he is no longer with us. But gosh, his attitude in life was an inspiration to many.

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Submitted by gabgreig on February 19, 2023

Modified on March 30, 2023

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Gab Greig

Gab Greig is illustrator of the psycho-educational children’s book: Its Just Different Now - published by Spectrum Publications in 1999 and still available for ordering through the publishers direct. The book is also on You Tube, narrated by Gab. In 2022/23 Gab authored and designed two self-published poetry books: Re-framing (poetry in a changing world) and Towards Clarity (poetry in enquiring times). Both books are beautifully illustrated with Gab's own photography. With a history of local community performances, as well as fourteen years as a children's entertainer, Gab is now doing both live, and occasional community radio, recitals. more…

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