Analysis of Is this what God feels like?
Nothing. thats what i heard when you held my face.
my demons watched your hand lift to caress my cheek and they cowered in fear, for who knew, who knew
there could ever be a spirit as radiant as yours.
who knew, who knew
there could be a essence so pure, id forget how unholy my life was before you blessed me.
Everything. thats what i felt when you kissed me.
after being numb for so long, after being tired for so long,
you made me feel everything i never knew i wanted to feel.
you reached through time , you made me remember why god made eve from Adam’s ribcage, i felt you in my bones.
Infinite. thats what we are. because there is no end to you as there is not beginning to me. you are me and i am you.
when you look at me, when i touch you, when you hug me, when i kiss you.
when you make love to me, when i cry to you, when you lay with me, when i speak to you.
it is forever an exchange of energy, it is the cloud into rain, rain into the ocean, back into a cloud, it is boundless. it is celestial.
It is Nothing.
It is Everything.
It is Infinite.
We are Nothing.
We are Everything.
We are Infinite.
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Metre | 10111111111 1101111101110110111111 11101010110011 1111 11101011101101011101111 1011111111 10101111101010111 111110110111011 111111101011111101111011 1001111011111111111010111110111 11111111111111111 111111111111111111111 110101011100110101110101010101111011010 1110 1110 11100 1110 1110 11100 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,122 |
Words | 241 |
Sentences | 23 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 19 |
Lines Amount | 19 |
Letters per line (avg) | 44 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 842 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 226 |
About this poem
i wrote this about a man i had started to fall in love with. im not very good with being vulnerable but he made me feel things i forgot i could feel. i wanted to let him know the best way i could.
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Written on December 25, 2022
Submitted by shalamar28 on February 12, 2023
Modified on April 25, 2023
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