Analysis of Mixed Emotions

Candi Carroll 1984 (Tallahassee)



Every since God took you
This is really rough on me
With so many emotions
That I need to set free.
I don't get to watch you
Stand there and say I do
Or buy your first house
With a bedroom or two.
I don't get to watch a child
Be able to call you dad
I believe you would be good
And this makes me mad.
We didn't get enough time
To be a family and grow
As my mind runs through
The memories that flow.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1001111 1110111 1110010 111111 111111 110111 11111 10111 1111101 1101111 1011111 01111 1101011 11010001 11111 010011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 405
Words 94
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 304
Words per stanza (avg) 87

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About losing my son

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Written on February 26, 2023

Submitted by candi.carroll4 on February 26, 2023

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Candi Carroll

I am a mother of four and caregiver for my mom. I love writing about my feelings. more…

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