Analysis of The Hug

Walt Benson 1950 (NYC)



If I said I want you,
Would your mind go straight to sex?
Would you not think better of me,
Than me whisking you off to bed?

Yes I want your body, pressed upon me tight,
To look so deeply in your eyes captive in your light.
To look upon the happiness sparkling in your eyes,
Feel your heart beat loudly as it lies here next to mine.

Wrap my arms around you pulling you close to me,
Holding you so tightly it takes my breath from me.
This simple hug, in which I share with you my love,
If this could be my eternity I could be happy ever more.


Scheme XXAX BBXX AAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1111111 11111011 1111111 11111010111 1111001110011 1101010010011 1111101111111 111011101111 101110111111 110101111111 11111010011110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 557
Words 127
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

Love is so much more than sex. The emotions run deeper than the physical and are so much more fulfilling. The emotional bonding and joining brings two people closer than any other act on earth

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Written on February 13, 2023

Submitted by walt.benson5 on February 27, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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