Analysis of The Path Toward Yourself
The submerged thought, that lasts forever,
The cherished loss, became a win
The endless care we share together
Naively makes the brain to sin,
And lets the thinker oversee.
We’ll sin to date, and date to be
The clumps we have, we try to unravel
And naturally, we’ll get too see
The end of it, the tie of it
Emerging up, emerging deep.
I love the colours sharpened by,
A glory story, that wee see
In forest down, the backwards way,
We love to think, will be the day
The day we feel, the other way.
I’m getting lost by thoughts and dreams,
The light I have has changed my path
I want to be, to go that way,
The way, that droves me overseas,
And reaches me to who I am.
As easy sounds, it helps you get
The choir of birds, the grass’ whistle
The path that sun has made you clear
At least, you try, you must conquer
The what you have, to what you get.
Scheme | ABABC CDCXX XCEEE XXEXX FDXAF |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 001111010 01010101 010111010 01010111 0101010 11110111 0111111010 010001111 01110111 01010101 1101101 01010111 01010101 11111101 01110101 11011101 01111111 11111111 01111101 01011111 11011111 010110110 01111111 11111110 01111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 868 |
Words | 191 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 5, 5, 5, 5 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 129 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 34 |
About this poem
This poem is all about life, and the path I’ve taken to encourage myself in being myself. I hope this poem written by me will stand as a example to many other people!
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Written on August 02, 2023
Submitted by apostolvitalie27 on February 09, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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