Analysis of Ahab, eyes wide open.



I search the line
The compelling blue
Coming up fickle
Each day.
As sailors play
At scrub, hoist, trim
And hopefully a sighting.
Whale!
Thar she blows.
Yes Lads to the boats.
Whetted points and staffs.
Rope in myriads of fathoms.
Muscles, backs, necks
Giving it all
To the chant rhythm.
Like some monks
In an abbey.
Expecting a kill.
A carcass.
Towing and slicing for the boil
Of rich light and warmth.
Back home.

But all is almost
Beside the point.
Tis the white One
What bit off me leg.
Him I will trail.
To Hell if necessary.
Risking every soul.
For the delicious recompense.
Gold coin to the one
Sighting Moby Dick.
My nemesis who Lords it over
Krill, octopus, mackerel and singing dolphin.
In that eerie, whining Deep.
So translucent.


Scheme XXXAAXXBXXXXXXXXCXXXXX XXDXBCXXDXXDXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 00101 10110 11 1101 1111 0100010 1 111 11101 10101 101110 1011 1011 10110 111 0110 01001 010 10010101 11101 11 1111 0101 1011 11111 1111 111100 101001 1001010 11101 10101 110011110 11010001010 0110101 1010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 742
Words 157
Sentences 23
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 22, 14
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 289
Words per stanza (avg) 67

About this poem

I wrote this piece while watching the excellent film In the Heart of the sea, directed by Ron Howard. The real account behind Herman Melville’s masterpiece of whaling. And one devilish white whale of the hunt.

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Written on March 09, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 09, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on March 09, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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