Analysis of The Old Kitchen



Mom would mix butter/margarine
Half and half
Softened
Throw in that colour spot yellow
Separate in small cooled containers.
Mom would mix  with vigour
The powdered skim milk
Kids not gonna get fat.
All that they wanted.
Mom would pre-boil several
Eggs.
The salad with celery, mayo a favourite.

Mom took special delight
In the cream portion
At top of milk bottle
(Milkman would rattle
At back door for empties.
Every other day.
Horse wagon out front.)

Yep Mom was busy
Happy with the morning’s radio
Music, comments and news.
Dearest Mom.

(Talking the fifties here.)


Scheme AXBCXDXXXEXB XAEEXXX XCXX D
Poetic Form
Metre 11110100 101 10 1011110 10011010 11111 01011 111011 11110 111110 1 01011001001 111001 00110 111110 1110 111110 100101 11011 11110 10101010 101001 101 100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 571
Words 111
Sentences 12
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 12, 7, 4, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

Once enjoyed at 171 Regent Street. London Ontario. Mom’s satisfaction and Homestead 1953-2010. Home base for family and many neighbours, relatives, friends. Go see Bev. She will handle it.

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Written on March 17, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 17, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on March 17, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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