Analysis of Fallen flower



Hiding under those ridiculous mask, absolute freaks
"Click-Clack" the fingers move around the keyboard
The creepy smile when your sharp words undresses my heart
Hatred is a wild plant which grows without even watering
A beautiful flower begins to fall loosing it's strength
My feets burns while walking on the path of fire
This isn't funny, my sufferings aren't your joy
"Is it all my fault ?", the hypocrisy lies in those words
The path leads to the end of the cliff
You will forget these actions, as I'm the one who is stomped on
Your words which created deep cuts in the scar
Now I'm scared of the choices which will have only regrets
Someone tell me who is this all for ?
I don't want to be a fallen flower anymore
Pretending that nothing actually happened
Forget everything that we saw
I can keep everything going, as I used to be
The wild plants should be chopped off
I can escape, don't be sad no more


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Poetic Form
Metre 1010101001101 1101010101 01011111111 101011110110100 01001001111011 111110101110 1101011001011 11111001001011 011101101 110111011011111 11101011001 11110101111001 11111111 111110101001 01011010010 0110111 111101011111 0111111 110111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 913
Words 173
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 721
Words per stanza (avg) 168
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Submitted by aswathi9499 on March 23, 2023

Modified on March 23, 2023

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