Analysis of Youthful, but…



In the restaurant
Illumined by the window
Smartly coiffed
And skin so clean.
She’s a looker
Shows advantage.
But do I know
Where she’s been?

Slits on wrists
Scars persevering.
Broken ribs
Not once, but twice.
Memories haunt
And foul the Life’s Path.
Walker stashed
And gait not nice.


Scheme XAXXXXAX XXXBXXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 0010 0101010 101 0111 1010 1010 1111 111 111 10010 101 1111 1001 01011 101 0111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 290
Words 56
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 8
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Written on March 24, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 24, 2023

Modified on April 14, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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