Analysis of Young Carpenter’s Day. Nazareth.



Father sends me to

Deliver Miriam's table

To her house, Bedside.

Over sixty five.

Pleasant, loves to talk.

Pretty much shut-in

Dad stated that price.

Won't be any problem with her.

How miserable when a customer

Gripes about price, quality.

I WILL NOT argue or quibble.

Unfounded but haggling.

I have watched Dad in that.

How he struggles in conflict.

My Dad is meek.

But also brave and

Firm, capable with those hands.

Before I leave.

Sweep up all of those

Shavings and chips.

Will make for a glorious

Evening fire. Mother loves those.

So do I.


Scheme X A X X X X X B B X A X X X X X X X C X X C X
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 010110 1011 10101 10111 10110 11011 11101010 1100010100 1011100 11110110 0101100 111101 1110010 1111 11010 1100111 0111 11111 1001 1110100 10101011 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 608
Words 147
Sentences 20
Stanzas 23
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 18
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on March 24, 2019

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 24, 2023

Modified on April 05, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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