Analysis of Hi



Love rings a bell
I’ve come out of my shell
Redemption is the goal
Love fills my soul

Heaven is all around
Ringing bells are the sound
I will not shut up
Salvation fills my cup

A tiny spark I am
God can help you out of a jam
I am filled with hope
God helps me cope

I’ll do God’s will
Our hearts He’ll fill
I will not die
I will survive to say “Hi”


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1101 111111 010101 1111 101101 101101 11111 010111 010111 11111101 11111 1111 1111 10111 1111 1101111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 362
Words 79
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

On the way to hospital for more test and this is what came out.

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Written on March 31, 2023

Submitted by Sadgirlartist on April 03, 2023

Modified on April 04, 2023

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Bonnie Barisa

I am a self taught writer and artist. I have written a couple of books. They are published under my previous name Bonnie J Breeden. They can be found on kindle, Amazon and Google. I have an art page on Facebook called Awesomesauce Art Studio. Also on Pinterest under Bonnie Barisa in the folder called Awesomesauce Art studio. If you look them up, please enjoy. more…

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