Analysis of I goofed up…

Wayne Blair 1951 (London)



Last week
Performance
Harmonica Group
Rockway senior centre.
Ninety minutes
Or thereabouts.
I threw in some Improv.
Not in the list
Strict list for performing.

Rick stopped full
Dead in his solo.
Could not adjust, continue
Looked over at me
What the…?
Twice…oops.
Trudy later reprimanded.
So that entire Group
Got the message.
Bad Dougie. BAD.
Oops again.
Message received.

(A busker always wants a little fun.)


Scheme XXAXXXXXX XXXXXXXAXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11 010 01001 11010 1010 101 11011 1001 111010 111 1011 1101010 11011 10 11 1010100 110101 1010 1101 101 1001 010110101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 420
Words 85
Sentences 15
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 12, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Written on April 04, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on April 04, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on April 04, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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