Analysis of Insomniac Slumber

JESUS BETANCOURT 1955 (New York)



I keep dreaming I'm awake
Clock on the wall loudly ticking
My image in a mirror makes me shake
Sweat on my brow constantly trickling

Propped up in a frozen position
My eyes reflection looking back at me
The room moves in a continuous rotation
Sleeping lightly with eyes open, it's what I see


Scheme ABAB CDCD
Poetic Form Traditional rhyme
Quatrain 
Metre 1110101 11011010 1100010111 111110010 110010010 1101010111 011000100010 101011101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 292
Words 55
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 27

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Written on April 08, 2023

Submitted on April 08, 2023

Modified on April 29, 2023

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