Analysis of Ancient Lace



I watched her Fragile Spirit tear, like ancient, sun-scorched lace
I remember tracing the battle-scars, across her weathered face
They reminded me of riverbeds, dried up remnants from the past
Meandering through dark corridors, of things that didn't last

Hidden in these caverns, were her youthful broken dreams
The pain of her lost beauty, still echoes from her screams
She crept toward the mirror soaked in Vodka enhanced hate
Her primal fears still haunt my dreams, but it's fifty years too late.

Too late to save my mother; too late to save myself
Feeling the pain of broken dreams, I took the Vodka off the shelf.
Now, as I creep toward my mirror, I see my mother's face'
I hear her screams reminding me, I'm just a remnant of ancient lace.

Another fragile spirit torn like, sun-scorched, ancient lace.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEAA A
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101110111 1010100101010101 10101111110101 010011100111101 1001100010101 0110110110101 11010101010011 010111111110111 111111011111 1001110111010101 111101110111101 11010101110101101 01010101111101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 810
Words 145
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 161
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

It's ironic how sometimes, everything we despised in a parent becomes such a focal point in our own life that we might inherently take on some of those 'despised' traits ourselves. Alcoholism is one of those common traits for many.

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Written on March 13, 2023

Submitted by lovingempath on March 13, 2023

Modified on May 03, 2023

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