Analysis of Broken Mirror

Robert S. O’Neal 1984 (Oklahoma)



Here I am, all alone,

standing face to face.

To the one I hate so much,

my heart begins to race.

I spit at him and curse him out,

as tears run down my face.

I drew my fist, my heart went still

As seemed time and space.

But when I swing it's me that bleeds,

A shatter makes it clear.

Now standing all alone,

looking at a broken mirror.

-       Robert S. O’Neal


Scheme A B X B X B X B X X A X X
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 10111 1011111 110111 11110111 111111 11111111 11101 11111111 010111 110101 10101010 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 374
Words 98
Sentences 8
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 20
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

It’s a story of struggles I went through as a young adult. From losing everything and being homeless at 18. Recovering and losing it all again

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Written on June 12, 1999

Submitted by airmanoneal on March 26, 2023

Modified on May 02, 2023

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