Analysis of CORRINE 4:16



waiting as to write the end
comes and goes the blowing wind
the ground so cold like soulless steel
now the tears i begin to kneel
days gone by since i let you go
3972. my heart says so
the longing is still......and wont go away
im coming soon......i prayed the day.


Scheme ABCCDDEE
Poetic Form
Metre 1011101 1010101 01111101 10110111 11111111 1111 010111101 1101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 265
Words 54
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 200
Words per stanza (avg) 52

About this poem

i lost my daughter 10 almost 11 yrs ago. as per the date in the title of this peom. i wrote it as one would find a verse in the bible. she left on april 16 2012.

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Written on March 02, 2023

Submitted by siyahlale on March 02, 2023

Modified on April 27, 2023

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