Analysis of Eloquence



Yuri Y. Dudik
03/07/2023
Per. 4
Snapshot Poem
"To love for the sake of being loved is human. To love for the sake of loving is angelic."
Morning light is reaching its finger tips over the tree tops
trying to get a glimpse of us,
because we are beautiful women.
It catches us still lingering in our sweats,
the couch in the living room hasn't been folded up yet.
Blankets and pillows are sprawled around.
We aren't carefree
but we are happy.
Droopy morning eyes begin to shine with our smiles
but the self doubt
 rdoesn't try to hide.
 eWe are growing into women
Thin a place where it's hard to know
 owhat to become.
  rWe are learning hardships in our world,
 Gbut we know-even when we aren't sure of anything-
lwe have each other.
eWe love each other
yfor no better reason
nthen to love.
And we are not angels.


Scheme ABCDAEFGHIJKKLMNGODPQCCGRS
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 1 1 110 11101110111011101110110 101110110110011 10110111 011110010 110111000101 01001011011011 100101101 1101 11110 1010101111101 1011 1111 11100110 10111111 1101 1110100101 1111011101110 11110 11110 111010 111 011110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 822
Words 165
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 629
Words per stanza (avg) 151

About this poem

For a forever friend.

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Written on November 09, 1999

Submitted by yuri810402002 on March 08, 2023

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