Analysis of Energy Sucker



Gosh you piss me off
You and your selfish ways
Rude in your every move
And in everything you say

It’s amazing how unaware you are
Thinking the world revolves around you
But could be wrong with me?
For staying through and through

It’s been over 13 years now
And now I’m really f*king done
The hurt you’ve caused lives inside me
But this time I have won

Because you want to stay in my life
But I won’t let that happen
I’ll prosper and grow through strife
And you’ll be left with famine

You see I don’t owe you an explanation
For why I disappeared
Or why you didn’t receive an invitation
To my event next year

The agony will live inside you
The way it’s lived inside me
You’re a damn energy sucker
Selfish for the charge you need


Scheme XXXX XABA XCBC DCDC CXCX ABXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11111 101101 1011001 001011 101010111 100101011 111111 110101 111011 01110111 01111011 111111 011111011 1111110 1100111 0111110 1111111010 11101 1111011010 110111 010011011 0111011 10110010 1010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 754
Words 148
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

In life, there are people I like to call “energy suckers.” They are extremely self unaware individuals whose behavior pulls the energy from your body leaving you feeling hurt, ashamed, and empty. They subtly disrespect you, your time, and the people you love. I find they are often charismatic individuals, which makes them hard to leave. This poem is a good riddance to an energy sucker I let stay in my life for far too long.

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Written on March 05, 2023

Submitted by Rkleopoulos on March 06, 2023

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Rosa Kleos

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