Analysis of I know what you are feeling



I know what you are feeling
A little tired and dead by a few days now
Looks like life; a bloody nonsense
Well, I wish I could help somehow.

Others may say that everything will be all right
But deep down you know "it won't"
Few may say they will always be with you.
But you know, they don't.

I know life could be easier if someone could stay
Who will wipe your tears wide and far
Few may say that you are not alone
But actually, you are.

Everyone says that time is the best healer
Or you will forget your pain with time
But you know and I know too
 that time cannot make you perfectly fine.

All I can advise you is to close your eyes
Think positive as much as you can do
You do not want any fake hope or person
The only person that needs you is you.


Scheme XAXA XBCB XDXD XXCX XCXC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Metre 1111110 010100110111 11101010 1111111 10111101111 1111111 111111111 11111 111111001111 11111101 111111101 110011 1011110110 111011111 1110111 1110111001 11101111111 1100111111 11111011110 0101011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 762
Words 172
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

This poem is dedicated to all those people who are suffering in their lives. Or they are tired of haiving false hope and dealing with fake people. This poem works like a mirror that tells you the truth that you came alone and will die alone. All you have is you. All ypu need is you.

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Written on March 16, 2023

Submitted by ayeshakashifs.2005 on March 16, 2023

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Ayesha kashif

I am 18 years old, an introverted girl. Who spent most of her time observing and writing. As a medical student, I like to learn the psychology of people. I live in Pakistan and work as a freelance content writer. more…

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