Analysis of My Girl, My Love

Trevor Logan 1986 (CA)



My girl’s got the kindest soul, oh
My girl’s got a heart of gold
She won't ever ask for help though
She'll help everybody else ‘cause
She just wants to love herself like
She loves everybody else, oh
My love’s got a heart of gold
My girl’s got the kindest soul

My girl dances beautifully
She makes all the angels sing
Songs of love and happiness
My love dances with finesse, yes
My girl dances with a kiss
In peaceful calming joyful bliss, oh
She makes all the angels sing
My love dances beautifully

My girl's such a lovely sight
With her touch she brings delight
With her voice she calms my soul
Her flavor's an enchanting dose
Her scent’s a potion for my nose
I love to smell her ramblin’ rose
With one touch she brings delight
My love’s such a love-ly sight

My girl's got fiery eyes
She's got long cool thighs
That wrap around my mind and squeeze my soul
The feeling never gets old
She wears a dark robe
A seductive cloak
Hiding her long cool thighs
My love’s got fire in her eyes


Scheme abaxxabc dExxxaEd ffcxggff hhcbxxhh
Poetic Form
Metre 11101011 1110111 11101111 1110011 11111011 1110011 1110111 1110101 1110100 1110101 1110100 11101011 1110101 010101011 1110101 1110100 1110101 1011101 1011111 0110101 01010111 1111011 1111101 1110111 1111001 11111 1101110111 0101011 11011 00101 100111 11110001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,003
Words 191
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 194
Words per stanza (avg) 47

About this poem

I wrote this poem about my beautiful girlfriend who is so kind, always offering help but never asking for any.

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Written on January 20, 2022

Submitted by Trevdowell on March 01, 2023

Modified on April 10, 2023

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Trevor Logan

Trevor Logan is a quiet poet who enjoys wildlife and gardening. He struggles with drug-resistant temporal-lobe epilepsy, which is a major influence on his writing as it causes hypergraphia (an almost uncontrollable urge to write). His poetry can be found on Instagram @AnEpilepticsPoetics https://instagram.com/anepilepticspoetics?igshid=ZDdkNTZiNTM= more…

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