Analysis of My Hero Flew a Huey

Renee Peyregne 1967 (Fayetteville, NC)



My hero flew a Huey
-Renee Peyregne

The utility ‘copter that dominated Vietnam
She carried troops and was equipped for bomb’s
The gunner in the side door was always sure
That her flight was guaranteed true and pure

She would decimate when she was needed
Then swoop in and save troops that pleaded
She was named after the brave Iroquois people
Whose bravery in time of war made them lethal

Not unlike our thick-skinned short-body war machine
Who heroism was shown with grace covered in OD Green
She entered service and stood proud with the 101st and 82nd
Stout, equipped and ready for the coming Armageddon

She fought valiantly alongside her soldier brothers
Ensuring that many were able to go home to their mothers
At times when the battlefield was eerily still and quiet,
Her Thump, Thump could be heard flown by a brave Army pilot

How we miss our flying green goddess of war
Flown by the Army, Airforce and Marine Corps
She was witness to much mayhem and death
Crying for pilots and soldiers who took their last breath

After the battle was over, she faded with grace and humility
To be seen less and less even though she never lost her ability
She can be seen here and there around the world
2016 the Army mourned for the last blades that whirled

The UH-1, Huey, or Iroquois; her names were many
Did me a great favor during her many conflicts a plenty
She guarded, carried and protected someone special
Keeping him safe and warm within her green metal

I speak of my dad who befriended a lady named Huey
And stuck with her for years in her cockpit so roomy
She ensured that he returned home to me each time
And was a companion to him in her prime

No need to say that a pilot was he
He was my hero who flew a Huey


Scheme AB XXCC DDEE BBDB FFGG HHII AAJJ AAEE AAKK AA
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010 011 001001110001 1101010111 0100011111 101101101 111011110 110011110 11110011010 110001111110 1011011110101 1100111110011 1101001110101 1010101010010 1110001101010 0101100101111110 11101011001010 01111111011010 111101011011 11010100011 111011101 1011001011111 100101101101100100 111101101110100100 11111010101 0101101111 011011001010 1101101001001010 110100010110 101101010110 111111010010110 011011001110 101110111111 01001011001 1111101011 1111011010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,726
Words 329
Sentences 1
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

This poem is in honor of my father who was a Huey pilot in Vietnam.

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Written on April 01, 2020

Submitted by reneepeyregne on March 23, 2023

Modified on April 12, 2023

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Renee Peyregne

I am an Army veteran, and a daughter of a Army veteran. I have been writing poetry and short stories for years. I grew up in the South, and have had a rich career in Human Resources. more…

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