Analysis of Passionate You,Passionate Me, Passionate We"



"Passionate You, Passionate Me, Passionate We"

Impetuous you says; "I'm not gonna make it to the house baby, I need you now!"
  Acquiescent me says; "I feel you baby, no time for love like now!"
  Simultaneous we; look to the back seat and together say, "now baby, now!

Obedient me; whips into the lot across the street from the house.
  Rapacious you; is already dragging me into the back seat.
  Boiling we; steam up the back seat and fog up all the windows with our heat.

Entangled me; feels an urgent need to breathe.
  Voracious you; could screw under water.
  Behooved we; decide to come up for air.

Despairing me; breaks for the door.
  Nympholeptic you says; "come back baby, come back!"
  Synchronistic we; have a thought and in unison say, "let's make love under the moonlight baby!"

Impulsive we; climb up on the hood of the car and find our flow in "Yin & Yang"
  Romantic you says; "I love making love under a moon so full and beautiful.
  Dysarthric me; (with your"Yin" in my mouth), looks up and says, surr ooks uull ud utalful oo ee! (Sure looks full and beautiful to me.)

Furverent me; has his engine running now and I want to see more of your full moon rising!
  Penetrated you; arches your back and howls at the moon, and the moonlight adds a silver tint to your golden hair.
  Rampant we; are fully engaged and move with a furor!

Delirious you; swimming and swooning with passion says, "Look baby I see shooting stars!"
  Incredulous me; says, "Yeah baby, take it like the wild woman that you are!"
Apparently we; are not on the same page!

Wayfaring you; leaves me spinning my wheels to climb up on the roof of the car and you say, "no silly, I saw real shooting stars, come up here and look.
  Pursuant me; says, Look, I'm coming up there to come! I'll look for stars later. I meet you on the roof and you climb into my lap and say, "I'm sorry I left you to go stargazing, let's do both!"
  Contented we; decide to show the man on the moon and the stars up above, a little something about a thing called love!

"Some time later"

Sated me says; "You know what baby?"
 Inquisitive you; answers, "No, what baby?"
Intuitively we; say in unison, "I Love You!"

Enamored me says: "Even with the moon and the stars and all of creation in the sky, you are still the most beautiful heavenly body above me tonight!"
  Winsome you responds; "You sweet talker you," as you bend down and kiss me, "let's go home and finish what we started, the night is young.
Conjointly we; walk home in the warm afterglow of our summer night's love making.
   We think of the love we will make when  we arrive home and once again become, Passionate you, Passionate me, Passionate we!


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Poetic Form
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Characters 2,711
Words 532
Sentences 34
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1, 3, 4
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 61
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 167
Words per stanza (avg) 41

About this poem

Written from a memory of love and passion, shared with joy and the hope that everyone can find one of those moments of connection with another person who brings you joy!

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Written on September 09, 2011

Submitted by Spiritbreeze on March 11, 2023

Modified on April 28, 2023

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