Analysis of Come What May, Camping.
Last two days in April
Thumbed his way
From Hamilton smoke and chimney
To bright breezy beaches
Of Dover.
Tad bit early but
Daffodils were out.
Robins and doves were back.
Looked like a green light.
He boogied south.
Light packing included
Three changes
Wash up stuff
Light pop-up tent
Two blankets.
Bevy of harmonicas.
Binoculars, cellphone.
Flashlights and matches.
Can openers. Lantern.
Did this three summers ago
Busking yield was pretty fair
Smiles, coins, muffins and fast food
Canned goods and pop.
Jubilant, smiling holiday bunch.
Many a thumbs up
From the wee ones.
But then the last week of August
Rained like hell.
Ponds trenched around the tent.
No staying dry.
Small length of recoiling
Clothesline, but little advantage.
Packed up everything with four days
To go to Labour Day.
Back to Hamilton flophouse.
Thirty eight years and divorced.
Trying desperately for twenty-nine.
Frame still lean
If he goes light on the drafts.
Will try to read more books
This time out.
Getting to sleep earlier.
August shooting stars to boot.
September factory job in those stars?
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111010 111 11001010 111010 110 11101 1001 100101 11011 111 110010 110 111 1111 110 1011 010010 1010 110010 1111001 111101 1110011 1101 10010101 10011 1011 11011110 111 110101 1101 1111 1110010 1110111 11111 111001 1011001 1010001101 111 1111101 111111 111 1011100 1010111 0101001011 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,086 |
Words | 214 |
Sentences | 27 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 10, 9, 7, 8, 5, 5 |
Lines Amount | 44 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 144 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 30 |
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Written on April 23, 2023
Submitted by dougb.19255 on April 23, 2023
Modified by dougb.19255 on April 23, 2023
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