Analysis of Come What May, Camping.



Last two days in April
Thumbed his way
From Hamilton smoke and chimney
To bright breezy beaches
Of Dover.
Tad bit early but
Daffodils were out.
Robins and doves were back.
Looked like a green light.
He boogied south.

Light packing included
Three changes
Wash up stuff
Light pop-up tent
Two blankets.
Bevy of harmonicas.
Binoculars, cellphone.
Flashlights and matches.
Can openers. Lantern.

Did this three summers ago
Busking yield was pretty fair
Smiles, coins, muffins and fast food
Canned goods and pop.
Jubilant, smiling holiday bunch.
Many a thumbs up
From the wee ones.

But then the last week of August
Rained like hell.
Ponds trenched around the tent.
No staying dry.
Small length of recoiling
Clothesline, but little advantage.
Packed up everything with four days
To go to Labour  Day.

Back to Hamilton flophouse.
Thirty eight years and divorced.
Trying desperately for twenty-nine.
Frame still lean
If he goes light on the drafts.

Will try to read more books
This time out.
Getting to sleep earlier.
August shooting stars to boot.
September factory job in those stars?


Scheme XAXBCXDEXX XBXFXBXBX XXXXXXX XXFXEXXA BXXXX XDCXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 111 11001010 111010 110 11101 1001 100101 11011 111 110010 110 111 1111 110 1011 010010 1010 110010 1111001 111101 1110011 1101 10010101 10011 1011 11011110 111 110101 1101 1111 1110010 1110111 11111 111001 1011001 1010001101 111 1111101 111111 111 1011100 1010111 0101001011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,086
Words 214
Sentences 27
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 10, 9, 7, 8, 5, 5
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 144
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Written on April 23, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on April 23, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on April 23, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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