Analysis of A Kiss (selection from Bernard Freeman Trotter, WW One poet)



She kissed me when she said good-bye—
A child's kiss, neither bold nor shy.

We had met but a few short summer hours;
Talked of the sun, the wind, the flowers,

Sports and people; had rambled through
A casual catchy song or two,

And walked with arms linked to the car
By the light of a single misty star.

(It was war-time, you see, and the streets were dark
Lest the ravishing Hun should find a mark.)

And so we turned to say good-bye;
But somehow or other, I don't know why,

—Perhaps `t was the feel of the khaki coat
(She'd a brother in Flanders then) that smote

Her heart with a sudden tenderness
Which issued in that swift caress—

Somehow, to her, at any rate
A mere hand-clasp seemed inadequate;

And so she lifted her dewey face
And kissed me—but without a trace

Of passion,—and we said good-bye…
A child's kiss,…neither bold nor shy.

My friend, I like you—it seemed to say—
Here's to our meeting again some day!

Some happier day…
Goodbye.


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE AA FF XX XX GG AA HH HA
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 01110111 11110111010 110101010 10101101 010010111 01111101 1011010101 11111100101 1010011101 01111111 111101111 01110110101 1010010111 011010100 11001101 1101101 011110100 011100101 01110101 11001111 01110111 111111111 1110100111 11001 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 998
Words 214
Sentences 6
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

Trotter died in military service, 1916. Native of Toronto ON. This poem is entered in a book of war time writings from 1914 to 1918. All the featured writers as soldiers died in the conflict.

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Written on April 25, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on April 25, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on April 25, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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