Analysis of A Ranting



Why can’t you just listen?
Why can’t you just pause?
I hurt and I want to explode.
There’s nobody else here.
I’ve come just to you
To rant and release this hard load.
But you have your Gospel
And hurt once or twice
And think that you now have the cure.

This challenge is ugly
I burn in its fire,
A fire that you say makes me pure.
Don’t be smugly certain
It all goes away.
Look down…see my guts on the floor.
I wanted compassion.
I wanted a friend.
Not platitudes heard oft’ before.

But now comes a new thing
Do I see some tears
That trickle and moisten the cheek?
Yes, just what I needed
A listening heart
Who knows what it’s like to be weak.


Scheme AXBXXBXXC XXCAXDAXD XXEXXE
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 11111 11011101 1111 11111 11001111 111110 01111 01111101 110110 110110 010111111 111010 11101 11111101 110010 11001 1101101 111011 11111 11001001 111110 01001 11111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 665
Words 148
Sentences 14
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 9, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 164
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Written on April 27, 2015

Submitted by dougb.19255 on April 27, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on April 27, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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