Analysis of Living, an exceptional film.



Nothing cloistered.
Not much in the evangelical
But really a healthy dose of conscience
And gritty resolve.
Never too late, yaknow.

He was button down
And by the clock.
Managing tirelessly
A bunch of young bureaucrats.
They could not believe
His stiff, unsmiling
Constancy and presentation.

They made jokes
Smirking behind his back.
Yearning for the dismissal bell
And some pub.

But then a turn of his health
An assessment undeniable.
Probably only six months.
We watch the about-face, softening.
Children who remain aloof.
Some workmates who confirm
A new spark, smile, touch, song.

Finally and without denial
He is gaining from
This Overthrow.
Making amends. Smiling.
Letting go of the doldrums
Of seeming duty. So often pointless.

And one recreation project
One simple little poor children’s playground
Manfully pushed through
By Mr. Williams
Gave him his final, richest ecstacy.


Scheme XABXC CXXXXDC XXXX XAXDXXX AXXDEX XXXEB
Poetic Form
Metre 1010 11000100 1100101110 01001 10111 11101 0101 100100 011110 11101 11010 1000010 111 100111 10100101 011 1101111 10100100 1001011 110011100 1010101 11101 011111 100001010 11101 110 100110 1011010 1101011010 0101010 110101101 10011 11010 11110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 905
Words 171
Sentences 21
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 4, 7, 6, 5
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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Written on April 28, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on April 28, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on April 28, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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