Analysis of Be With Me
Be with me
Under that bushy tree
Where we can write
our cozy dreams
And tell our funny stories
Talk about those silly things
And laugh out loud with no endings.
Be with me
Where we can escape
Watching the stars,
Under the moonlit sky
Where we can imagine we fly
And be free at last
Where we don’t think about our past.
Be with me
In the deep blue sea
As we whisper untold secrets
And our memories so sweet
Be with me,
that’s all I need
Let me be at ease
Let me be just me.
| Scheme | Aaxxbcc Axxddee AaxxAxba |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 111 101101 1111 10101 01101010 1011101 01111110 111 11101 1001 10011 11101011 01111 111101101 111 00111 11100110 01010011 111 1111 11111 11111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 483 |
| Words | 106 |
| Sentences | 3 |
| Stanzas | 3 |
| Stanza Lengths | 7, 7, 8 |
| Lines Amount | 22 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
| Words per line (avg) | 4 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 123 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 33 |
About this poem
Together with my daughters, we have written our first poem. While driving, my youngest daughter was typing on my phone. Initially, we had thought that the poem was meant for my husband, but we realized that it could apply to anyone who brings us peace and comfort, such as our families. Upon further writing and editing, we have come to the conclusion that the poem was actually meant for ourselves.
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Written on April 29, 2023
Submitted by Wildflower888 on April 29, 2023
Modified by Wildflower888 on April 30, 2023
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