Analysis of Among the Hogs



Came to myself
And the sight was not pretty
Came to myself
In a mud-spattered mess.
Father had rendered
My share in the family
Knowing full well
That it scarcely could bless.
Friends had been fast
As I opened the purse-strings
Life had seemed sweet
In the dark rooms of sin
Wine is a mocker
And strong drink is raging
Feeling a king-pin
I sauntered right in.
Now I am working
A stranger’s foul homestead
Feeding his swine
This, a Jew’s strangest thought
Missing my Father
And joys at the Home-Farm
Cursed this condition
My own lusts had wrought.
Might I go back
And appeal now for mercy?
Yes, it seems wiser
Than all else around
Sensing a hope
That defies all description:
Dead might be raised
And the lost might be found.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111 0011110 111 001101 10110 1100100 1011 111011 1111 1110011 1111 001111 1101 011110 10011 1110 11110 01011 1011 101101 10110 011011 11010 11111 1111 0011110 11110 11101 1001 1011010 1111 001111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 726
Words 139
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 32
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 575
Words per stanza (avg) 133
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Written on May 05, 2018

Submitted by dougb.19255 on May 05, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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