Analysis of A SURPRISE



To the gate I ‘d like  you   to bringme where the moon melts
Incessantly and imperceptibly,
Where the sun stuns it and the cloud hides it
So that away from the impulse of your love
I could feel what I took and gave and met
Without winning or losing without fake magic
And false truths but with surprise.. A warm surprise..
As if I had long needed u
Maximum need that now I count in your kisses..
Forever yours my love
Forever mine your affection..
Fron sping to summer to burnit to see how i extinguishit!!!


Scheme ABCDEFGHIDJC
Poetic Form
Metre 1011111111011 010000100 1011100111 11011010111 1111110101 011011001110 01111010101 11111101 100111110110 010111 01011010 111101111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 509
Words 100
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 396
Words per stanza (avg) 99

About this poem

I WROTE THIS POEM BECAUSE I WAS INLOVE WITH A FOREIGER SO DIFFERENT FROM ME!!

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Submitted by SOFIAATSALI on April 21, 2023

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