Analysis of Aorbnaml Tohguhts



Abnormal cerebral cortex forces distorted thoughts
that scratch away the patch work of my crossed circuits.
So now I’m lost when I search for an answer,
fore I cross paths with a trance
and interreact without fighting back.

My hippocampus just can’t understand this distance
that exists between me and my senses,
this persistent resistance dispenses intense suffering
that’s overpowering my being
and claiming to be reality
when in fact it’s not,
it's just distorted thoughts
brought forth from the core,
and once more
my mind lies to my eyes,
blinding real life with sights from the night,
disturbed and confused,
then reused in the light
yet deferred to an obscure blur
that I
can’t
quite
u
n
d
e
r
s
t
a
n
d
?


Scheme axbxx xxccdxaeexfxfbxxfxGDdxxdxGD
Poetic Form
Metre 01010010100101 110101111110 11111111110 1111101 0101101 10101101110 1010110110 101001001001100 11010110 0101110 10111 110101 11101 011 111111 101111101 01001 101001 10111011 11 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 0 1 1 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 723
Words 136
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 5, 28
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 285
Words per stanza (avg) 64

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Describing a simple-partial seizure.

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Submitted by Trevdowell on April 10, 2023

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Trevor Logan

Trevor Logan is a quiet poet who enjoys wildlife and gardening. He struggles with drug-resistant temporal-lobe epilepsy, which is a major influence on his writing as it causes hypergraphia (an almost uncontrollable urge to write). His poetry can be found on Instagram @AnEpilepticsPoetics https://instagram.com/anepilepticspoetics?igshid=ZDdkNTZiNTM= more…

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