Analysis of My Sad Little World: A Free Verse Ode To Your Absence



I can not, I can not.
I can not keep thinking.
I can not keep thinking
About my lack of time
And my worlds lack of
Permanence; and you.
I can not keep thinking
Of you; of us. What my
Sad little world would
Feel like with you in it.
And you know. You know
All I truly am right now is
The epitome of my sad little
World. My sad little world.
The sad little world that
I live in. Limbo. And of
Course I've heard their
Theories. True, they may
Be true; it is true, for me
And my sad little world
Filled to its brim with fear,
And the arts, and self
Deprecation. I'm scared
Of everything; but im so
Scared of everything that
May, or will never be, and
The things I think should;
But, please. Please. I beg
Of you to listen, to see; but to
You, its just myself and
My sad little world that you
And I both conclude I’lll
Never be able to leave.
The difference? Done as
We do best; I think, and you
Know; I can not, I can not.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 938
Words 215
Sentences 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 36
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 689
Words per stanza (avg) 190

About this poem

Written in a haste of erratic sadness for the things that I wish were and the things I believe may always be. If anything is to be taken from this poem I hope it's the understanding for the abundant passion I have that overflows onto my pages, and I believe this poem overall is a testament to that.

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Written on February 26, 2023

Submitted by ReneeLeeParr on March 28, 2023

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Renee Lee Parr

I really like the solitude of wide open spaces with my puppy Bridgette, as well as the draw of the city lights at night and am always up for an adventure. I draw my inspiration from most things melancholy and plan on completing my degree in creative writing and literature. more…

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