Analysis of Peyote's Frost



The yellow wood is full of dreams,  
I tend to have when I sleep,
deep roads diverged in front of me,
'But wait' I,
shout to the other me,
"I have promises to keep and miles to go before I sleep",
a man he looked at me,
with chicken beaks for feet,
does he know visions that I see,
I mean he seen the vison of the green,
he thinks it's all just energy,
For helping mother,
'nature's first green is gold",
An ancient light leads me,
down the path so I must keep,
Going until I laugh so hard,
tripping over my face,
my mind opened and promised me,
to keep A long journey,
ahead of me,
but at last, I passed right out and from there I fell asleep.


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 657
Words 151
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 482
Words per stanza (avg) 131

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This is a poem i wrote as if Robert Frost wrote it while tripping on peyote

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Written on March 25, 2023

Submitted by Bernosmojo on March 28, 2023

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Martin Berno

I grew up in Vermont listening to all kinds of music but I was really into the Grateful Dead! I was in the Marines for 4 years and then moved back to Vermon! I have a beautiful daughter Taylor! I have always been into writing poems but stopped after the Marine Corps until recently started getting into it again. more…

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