Analysis of River of Regret



Past deeds swept under the bridge
in the river of regret
should be gone ’cause they can’t be changed,
but, alas, they plague me yet.

Stalled in a swirling eddy,
they flood me with reminders of sin.
I want to forget my errors,
but I’m reminded again and again.  

Why do they still swamp my mind,
accusing and full of blame?
What is done is forever done,
but I drown in them just the same.


Scheme XAXA XXXX XBXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 1111001 0010101 11111111 1011111 1001010 111101011 11101110 1101001001 1111111 0100111 11110101 11101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 399
Words 87
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

This poem is a lament about how, at times, I catch myself reviewing past mistakes or blunders, things I wish I could do over, which of course is impossible, and feeling the pain of remorse all over again.

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Written on March 26, 2023

Submitted by janet_1 on April 16, 2023

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Janet Muirhead Hill

Janet Muirhead Hill is a novelist who occasionally writes poetry for fun and for self-expression. Her published books include the Miranda and Starlight series of horse stories for middle-grade readers and other fiction. more…

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