Analysis of Tending The Rules Of Affection
TENDING THE RULES OF AFFECTION
It’s that time again when my white cat Penelope likes to stretch out
twice her length on the royal-blue sofa without rhyme or reason,
Smugly ignoring all entreaties for affection, licking one curled paw
after another, undisturbed in her lazy repose until dinner,
or a suitable time by late afternoon when the fins of the sun,
warming her like a cotton blanket, begin their ritual of climbing
up the wall and retreat on the ceiling toward the horizon for the evening,
leaving her purring in the room painted lavender and teal. Her delicate
twilight aura on the sofa twins the moon’s corona. Was I wrong
to interrupt her? Gently smooth her silky back hairs from ear to tail,
only to fall victim to claws ejecting faster than a snapped mouse trap
followed by crimson highways etched like a road map across the back
of my hand. A good lesson learned. If only she were the solicitous way
of my golden retriever, Malakai, who happens to be mahogany not golden.
She’d have a virtuous spunk, a protective function, a playful nature panting,
forever panting. But would I if I could exchange Penelope’s bold aloofness,
her endearing rubs against my neck, her scrambling after a stupid fish
on a string, for anything? Malakai barks at his own shadow, drools
on the bed, and tries to hump my neighbor’s leg. What to make of all of this?
The rumbly snore of an obedient dog? The rippling purr of an independent cat?
By 10 pm my Hulu binge is five episodes deep; absolutely the best time
for another cup of hot tea with lemon or honey, undecided on who's the most adorable.
Scheme | A XA XX AB BX XX XX XA BC XC XX XX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10011010 11101111101001111 1011010110011110 100101010101010111 10010010010010110 1010011101101101 100101010011100110 10100110100100101010 1001000110100010100 1101010101010111 1010101010111111 101110110101010111 101101110110101 1110110111010001001 11100101110110100110 11010010010100101010 010101111110111010 0010101110100100101 1011101111111 101011111011111111 011110100101001110101 11111111101010011 1010111111011001011010100 |
Characters | 1,643 |
Words | 316 |
Sentences | 15 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 55 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 106 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
About this poem
It's about my cat and dog whom I equally adore, despite their individual quirks and the fact my daughter likes cats more. In the end, their attributes make them equally affectionate.
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